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Burning Commissions

Burning Commissions

Chapter 1: The Heat of the Deal

The Auckland skyline shimmered under the late afternoon sun, a backdrop of glass and steel that mirrored the tension brewing in the sleek offices of Pinnacle Realty. Ivan, with his sharp green eyes and tousled light brown hair, leaned against the conference table, a smirk playing on his lips as he reviewed the latest property listings. At 40, he carried the rugged charm of a man who’d seen deals turn sour and still walked away with a win. Across from him stood Luma, her olive skin glowing under the fluorescent lights, long black hair cascading over her shoulders like a dark waterfall. At 46, she defied time, her dark eyes sparking with a fire that could close any deal—or ignite something far more dangerous.

They were Team Ivan, the unbeatable duo of Auckland’s cutthroat real estate scene. Their chemistry was undeniable, a mix of sharp banter and unspoken heat that simmered beneath every interaction. Today, though, the air felt heavier, charged with something neither could ignore.

'Another multi-million-dollar listing, Ivan. You think you can keep up with me on this one?' Luma teased, her voice a sultry challenge as she slid the dossier across the table, her fingers brushing his just long enough to send a jolt through him.

Ivan chuckled, his gaze locking with hers. 'Keep up? Darling, I’m already three steps ahead. Question is, can you handle the pace when I start running circles around you?'

Luma’s lips curled into a wicked smile, her eyes glinting with mischief. 'Oh, I can handle anything you throw at me. But let’s see if you’ve got the stamina to close this deal… or anything else.'

The innuendo hung between them, thick and electric. Ivan straightened, stepping closer, the space between them shrinking until the scent of her jasmine perfume filled his senses. 'Careful, Luma. Keep talking like that, and I might just take you up on the challenge—right here, right now.'

She didn’t back down, her posture confident, her stare unflinching. 'Promises, promises. You’re all talk, Ivan. I’m waiting for the follow-through.' Her voice dropped, a husky whisper that sent heat racing down his spine.

The room seemed to shrink, the hum of the city outside fading as their banter turned into something raw, primal. Ivan’s hand reached out, grazing her arm, his touch deliberate. 'You want follow-through? I’ve got plenty to give. Just say the word.'

Luma’s breath hitched, but her smirk didn’t waver. She leaned in, her lips inches from his, her voice a seductive purr. 'Then stop talking and show me. I’m not some fragile flower, Ivan. I play hard—and I win.'

That was it. The dam broke. Ivan’s hand slid to her waist, pulling her against him, her curves pressing into his frame as their mouths crashed together in a hungry, desperate kiss. The taste of her was intoxicating, a mix of spice and defiance that made his head spin. Luma’s fingers tangled in his hair, tugging just enough to draw a low growl from him, her body arching into his with a demand for more.

They stumbled back against the conference table, papers scattering as the heat between them flared. Ivan’s hands roamed, tracing the lines of her body, while Luma’s nails grazed his neck, her breath hot against his ear. 'Don’t hold back,' she murmured, her tone a command, not a plea. 'I want everything.'

And as the world outside faded, the promise of something explosive loomed—hard, raw, and unstoppable.

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