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Carol's Command

Carol's Command

Chapter 1: The Invitation

Carol leaned against the kitchen counter, her sharp green eyes glinting with a dangerous kind of mischief as she sipped her wine. Her husband, Fred, sat at the table, oblivious, scrolling through his phone with that same tired expression he’d worn for months. She was done with the monotony, the predictability. Tonight, she was taking control.

'Fred, darling,' she purred, her voice dripping with a honeyed edge that made him glance up, startled. 'I’ve invited someone over tonight. An old friend. You’ll be nice, won’t you?'

Fred’s brow furrowed, his mouth opening to protest, but Carol cut him off with a raised hand. 'Don’t start with the whining, sweetheart. It’s happening. And you’re going to sit there and enjoy the show.' Her lips curled into a wicked smile, daring him to challenge her.

'Who is it?' Fred asked, his voice tight, suspicion creeping in.

'Oh, you’ll see,' she teased, turning to adjust her tight black dress that hugged every curve of her athletic frame. 'Let’s just say he knows how to handle a woman who knows what she wants.'

The doorbell rang, and Carol’s grin widened. She sauntered to the door, her hips swaying with purpose, leaving Fred frozen at the table. When she opened it, there stood Dave—her ex-boyfriend, all six-foot-two of rugged charm, his smirk as cocky as ever. His dark eyes raked over her, and she felt a thrill of heat coil low in her belly.

'Damn, Carol, you haven’t changed a bit,' Dave drawled, stepping inside without waiting for an invitation. 'Still the hottest piece of trouble I’ve ever known.'

She laughed, a low, throaty sound, and slapped his chest playfully. 'And you’re still a smug bastard. Come in, let’s give Fred a proper introduction.'

Fred’s face paled as Dave strode into the kitchen, his presence filling the room. 'Fred, meet Dave,' Carol said, her tone laced with amusement. 'We go way back. And tonight, he’s here to remind me what I’ve been missing.'

Fred’s jaw clenched, but he didn’t move. 'Carol, what the hell is this?' he muttered, his voice barely above a whisper.

'This,' she said, stepping closer to Dave, her hand trailing up his arm, 'is me taking what I want. You’ve had your chance to keep up, Fred. Now, you get to watch and learn.' She turned to Dave, her eyes blazing with intent. 'Isn’t that right, stud?'

Dave chuckled, his hand sliding to her waist, pulling her against him. 'Hell yeah, babe. I’ve been waiting to get my hands on you again. Let’s show him how it’s done.'

Carol’s gaze flicked to Fred, pinning him in place. 'Stay right there, honey. Don’t even think about looking away.' Her voice was a command, sharp and unyielding, as she tilted her head up to meet Dave’s hungry kiss. Their lips crashed together, fierce and unapologetic, her fingers digging into his shoulders as his hands roamed her body with a familiarity that made Fred’s stomach twist.

She pulled back just enough to murmur against Dave’s lips, loud enough for Fred to hear, 'I’ve missed this. Missed feeling wanted, missed feeling... hard.' Her hand slid down Dave’s chest, lower, teasing, and she smirked at the bulge already straining against his jeans. 'Oh, you’re ready for me, aren’t you?'

Dave grinned, his voice rough with desire. 'Always, babe. Let’s give him a real show. I want him to see how wet I can make you.'

Carol’s laugh was pure sin as she tugged Dave toward the living room, her eyes never leaving Fred’s. 'Come on, then. Let’s see if you can still handle this pussy like you used to.'

Fred sat, rooted to the spot, as the air thickened with tension and the promise of something explosive. Carol was in charge, and she was about to make sure everyone knew it.

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