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Closing the Deal

Closing the Deal

Chapter 1: The Open House Heat

The late afternoon sun spilled through the floor-to-ceiling windows of the luxury Auckland penthouse, casting golden streaks across the polished hardwood floors. Ivan adjusted his tie, his green eyes glinting with a mix of mischief and determination as he surveyed the empty space. At 40, he carried the rugged charm of his Croatian heritage—light brown hair slightly tousled, a jawline that could cut glass, and a smirk that had sealed more deals than his spreadsheets ever could.

Beside him, Luma was a vision of effortless allure. Her olive skin glowed under the warm light, and her long, luscious black hair cascaded over her shoulders, framing dark eyes that could pierce through any negotiation. At 46, she looked a decade younger, her confidence and sharp wit making her a force in any room. As real estate partners on Team Ivan, their chemistry was undeniable—both in the boardroom and, increasingly, in the unspoken tension that simmered between them.

'This place is a bloody goldmine,' Ivan said, his voice low and teasing as he leaned against the marble countertop of the open-plan kitchen. 'But I reckon we could sell it faster if we staged a little... personal touch.'

Luma arched a perfectly sculpted brow, crossing her arms with a smirk. 'Oh, really? And what exactly does the great Ivan have in mind? A candlelit dinner for the buyers? Or are you just fishing for compliments on your interior design skills?'

He chuckled, stepping closer, the space between them shrinking. 'Nah, I’m thinking something hotter. Something that’d make anyone want to sign on the dotted line just to feel the vibe we’ve got going.' His gaze dropped to her lips for a split second before returning to her eyes, daring her to bite.

Luma didn’t flinch. Instead, she tilted her head, her voice dripping with playful challenge. 'Careful, Ivan. You’re playing with fire, and I’m not the kind of woman who gets burned. If you’ve got a pitch, make it. I’m all ears.'

His grin widened, and he gestured to the sprawling living area. 'Picture this: you and me, right here, after hours. No clients, no contracts—just us, breaking in this place properly. Bet we’d have buyers lining up just to soak in the energy we’d leave behind.'

She laughed, a rich, throaty sound that sent a jolt through him. 'You’re incorrigible. But I’ll give you points for creativity. Tell me, though—are you always this cocky, or is it just the million-dollar view getting to your head?'

Ivan stepped even closer, his voice dropping to a husky whisper. 'It’s not the view, Luma. It’s you. Always has been. I’m hard just thinking about what we could do in a place like this.'

Her dark eyes flashed with something dangerous and delicious, and she didn’t back away. Instead, she reached out, her fingers brushing against his chest as she leaned in, her breath warm against his ear. 'Big talk. But I’m not some damsel waiting for a man to make the first move. If you want me, Ivan, you’d better be ready to keep up. I play to win.'

The air crackled between them, charged with raw, unspoken desire. Ivan’s hands found her waist, pulling her against him, feeling the heat of her body through the thin fabric of her tailored blazer. Luma’s lips curled into a wicked smile as she pressed herself closer, her nails grazing the back of his neck.

'Game on, then,' she purred, her voice a sultry dare. 'Let’s see if you can close this deal.'

Their lips crashed together, hungry and fierce, a collision of pent-up tension that had been building for months. Ivan’s hands roamed down her back, gripping her ass with a possessive edge, while Luma’s fingers tangled in his hair, pulling him deeper into the kiss. They stumbled backward, her back hitting the cool marble of the kitchen island, both of them panting already, the promise of more—much more—hanging heavy in the air. Her skin was already flushed, her eyes wild with a need that matched his own, and he knew they were seconds away from tearing into each other, right there in the empty penthouse.

But for now, the heat was just beginning to build, and neither of them was about to back down.

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