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Closing the Deal

Closing the Deal

Chapter 1: The Open House Tease

The late afternoon sun cast golden streaks through the expansive windows of the luxury Auckland penthouse, bathing the sleek marble floors in a warm glow. Ivan, with his sharp green eyes and tousled light brown hair, adjusted his tailored navy suit as he surveyed the open house setup. At 40, he carried the rugged charm of a man who knew his worth, a Croatian fire simmering beneath his polished exterior. Beside him, Luma, 46 but with the fierce allure of a woman in her prime, smoothed the fabric of her crimson pencil dress over her curves. Her olive skin gleamed under the light, and her long, luscious black hair cascaded over her shoulders, framing dark eyes that could close a deal—or break a heart.

They were Team Ivan, the unbeatable duo of Auckland’s real estate scene, known for selling multimillion-dollar properties with a blend of charm and ruthless strategy. Today’s open house was their latest conquest, a penthouse priced at a cool $5 million, and the tension between them crackled hotter than the summer air.

“Think we’ll snag a buyer today, or are we just here to flirt with each other?” Luma quipped, her voice a sultry purr as she leaned over the granite countertop, her gaze locking with Ivan’s. She wasn’t just teasing; she was testing him, as always.

Ivan smirked, stepping closer, his cologne a subtle spice in the air. “Oh, Luma, if I didn’t know better, I’d say you’re more interested in closing a deal with me than with any client. But let’s not pretend—you’d eat me alive before I even got a word in.”

She laughed, a rich, throaty sound that sent a jolt through him. “Darling, I don’t eat my prey. I savor it. But you’re right—let’s focus. Though I can’t help noticing how that suit hugs you. Trying to distract me?”

“Only if it’s working,” he shot back, his voice dropping low, eyes glinting with mischief. “But I’ve seen the way you work a room. You’ve got every man here sweating before they even sign a contract. Tell me, how do you do it?”

Luma tilted her head, a predator’s smile playing on her lips. “It’s all in the details, Ivan. A look here, a touch there. I make them want something they can’t have—until I decide they can.” She brushed past him, her hip grazing his thigh deliberately as she moved to adjust a vase on the counter. The contact was electric, a silent dare.

He followed her, his breath hitching just enough to betray his cool facade. “Careful, Luma. Keep playing games like that, and I might just call your bluff. Right here, in this overpriced penthouse.”

She turned, her dark eyes blazing with challenge. “Oh, Ivan, I don’t bluff. I win. But if you think you can handle me, let’s see how long you last before you’re begging for a signature—on more than just a contract.”

The room seemed to shrink around them, the hum of potential buyers fading into a distant buzz. Ivan’s pulse quickened as he stepped into her space, his hand brushing against her waist. “I’m not one of your clients, sweetheart. I don’t beg. I take what I want.”

Luma’s lips parted, her breath warm and teasing as she leaned in, her voice a whisper. “Then take it, Ivan. Show me you’ve got the guts to match that mouth.”

Their faces were inches apart now, the air thick with unspoken promises. His fingers tightened on her hip, feeling the heat of her through the thin fabric of her dress. Her scent—jasmine and something darker—filled his senses, making him hard with a need he hadn’t anticipated. She wasn’t backing down, her gaze daring him to cross the line, her body pressed just close enough to feel the tension coil tighter.

And then, as his lips hovered over hers, the penthouse door swung open with a loud creak, a latecomer client stepping in. They froze, the moment suspended, both of them panting with the unspoken hunger that promised to explode the second they were alone. Luma pulled back with a wicked grin, smoothing her dress as if nothing had happened. “Game on, Ivan,” she murmured, her voice dripping with intent. “Let’s see who closes first.”

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