The neon sign flickered and buzzed above the door, casting an eerie glow over the seedy bar below. Vi stumbled through the entrance, already well on her way to being drunk. She slurred her words as she ordered another drink, cursing when she realized she was out of money.
But Vi was not one to be deterred. She scanned the room, her bleary eyes landing on a group of rough-looking men in the corner. She made her way over to them, swaying slightly as she walked.
"Hey, boys," she said, slurring her words. "Buy a girl a drink?"
The men exchanged a look, but one of them - a tall, muscular man with tattoos covering his arms - nodded. "Sure thing, sweetheart," he said, signaling to the bartender.
Vi smiled, pleased with herself. She may have been down on her luck, but she still had her charm. She downed the drink the man bought her, and ordered another.
But as the night wore on, Vi's charm began to wear thin. She started to slur her words more, and her insults became more biting. She called the men "losers" and "scumbags", laughing as they tried to brush her off.
But two men - Silko and Jinx - were not deterred. They exchanged a knowing look as Vi insulted them, and made their way over to her.
"Hey, gorgeous," Silko said, grinning at Vi. "Why don't you let us buy you a drink?"
Vi tried to brush them off, insulting their clothes and calling them "losers". But Silko and Jinx were not deterred. They bought Vi a drink, and she downed it quickly. As she became more and more drunk, her insults turned playful and her resistance weakened.
Silko and Jinx took advantage of the situation, leading Vi back to their apartment. Vi stumbled along, still cursing and insulting them, but unable to put up much of a fight.
Once they reached the apartment, Vi collapsed onto the bed. Silko and Jinx wasted no time, beginning to undress her and touch her body.
Vi tried to push them away, but she was too drunk to put up much of a fight. She mumbled something about "not being that kind of girl", but Silko and Jinx just laughed.
"Oh, come on, Vi," Jinx said, grinning as he undid her bra. "We all know you want it."
Vi tried to protest, but her words were slurred and barely coherent. She may not have been fully on board, but she was no longer fighting them off.
Silko and Jinx took turns fucking Vi, who was too drunk to do much more than moan and whimper. They took turns calling her names and making playful insults, but Vi didn't seem to mind.
As the night wore on, Vi became more and more broken. She was no longer resisting, and she was barely conscious. Silko and Jinx continued to fuck her, using her body for their own pleasure. They didn't care that she was too drunk to consent - they were in control now.
Finally, Vi passed out completely. Silko and Jinx took a moment to catch their breath before cleaning up and going to bed.
Vi woke up the next morning, feeling sore and violated. She tried to sit up, but her head was spinning and she fell back onto the bed. She realized what had happened the night before, and she was filled with a mix of shame and anger.
But as she tried to get up and leave, she found that she couldn't. Silko and Jinx were there, blocking the door. They smiled at Vi, and she knew that she was theirs now. She may have been strong and controlling before, but now she was nothing more than their obedient sex slave.
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