Chapter 1: The Edge of Retribution
The alley was a suffocating maze of shadows, the air thick with the metallic tang of fear. Li-Tan’s grip on the knife was steady, its cold blade hovering just above Han Song-Min’s trembling throat. The man’s pleas echoed off the grimy walls, a pathetic symphony of desperation. 'No… no, please! I’m sorry! I won’t do it again!' Song-Min’s voice cracked, his eyes wide with terror, a thin trickle of blood tracing a path down his cheek from a fresh cut.
Li-Tan’s dark eyes narrowed, his jaw tight as he wrestled with the unfamiliar pang in his chest. Five kills, five monsters erased from this world—each one a predator, a stain on humanity, confirmed by his uncanny intuition. But this one? Song-Min wasn’t a killer, not in the literal sense. He was a manipulator, a coward who’d driven a woman, Ken-U, to her tragic end with his lies and betrayal. Li-Tan’s gut churned—not with the usual certainty of justice, but with something murkier, something dangerous.
'Please… I’ll do anything! Just let me go!' Song-Min’s voice was hoarse, his body trembling beneath Li-Tan’s iron hold. The man’s polished exterior—office worker, caring facade—meant nothing now. Li-Tan saw through it, saw the rot beneath. But death? Death felt too easy, too final for this bastard. He wanted him to *feel* the pain he’d inflicted, to drown in it.
Li-Tan crouched beside him, lighting a cigarette with a flick of his lighter, the amber glow illuminating his sharp features. 'Anything, huh?' His voice was low, a dangerous purr laced with contempt. 'You think a few tears and empty promises erase what you did to her? To Ken-U? You broke her, Song-Min. You watched her suffer and got off on it.'
Song-Min’s face crumpled, his breath hitching. 'I… I didn’t mean to! I cared about her, I swear! I’m not a monster!'
Li-Tan exhaled a plume of smoke, his smirk cold and cutting. 'Cared? You married another woman behind her back, played her like a damn toy. You knew her past—knew about that video, the violation she endured—and still, you twisted the knife deeper. You’re worse than a monster. You’re a parasite.'
Song-Min flinched, his bound hands twitching against the ropes that held him to the creaking bed in this abandoned hideout. Li-Tan’s mind raced. Killing wasn’t the answer—not this time. Public humiliation? No, too risky; the police were already sniffing around his trail. Telling Song-Min’s wife? Pointless—she’d never believe a stranger over her husband. No, this needed to be personal. Visceral.
A dark idea slithered into Li-Tan’s mind, curling around his thoughts like a venomous snake. He leaned closer, his cigarette dangling from his lips as he set his phone on the nearby table, the red light of the recording button blinking to life. Song-Min’s eyes darted to it, panic flaring. 'W-what are you doing? What’s that for?'
Li-Tan’s smile was a blade of its own, sharp and merciless. 'Remember that video of Ken-U? The one you watched while she suffered? The one that got you hard, you sick fuck?' His words dripped with venom, each syllable a lash. He grabbed Song-Min by the collar, yanking him up slightly, the man’s gasp sharp in the stale air. 'You’re gonna feel what she felt. Every. Single. Bit.'
Song-Min’s face drained of color, his voice a whimper. 'No… no, I didn’t mean it! I didn’t do that to her! Please, I’ll do anything—just don’t kill me!'
Li-Tan’s laugh was low, dangerous, as he pulled out his knife again, not to cut flesh but fabric. With deliberate, predatory precision, he sliced through Song-Min’s shirt, the sound of tearing cloth a sinister prelude. 'Oh, I’m not gonna kill you,' he murmured, his tone dripping with dark promise. 'I’m gonna make you wish I had.'
Song-Min’s eyes widened in horror, his body trembling as the last shreds of his clothing fell away, leaving him exposed, vulnerable. 'W-what are you going to do to me?' His voice was a broken whisper, but Li-Tan ignored it, his focus razor-sharp as he unbuckled his own belt, the metallic clink echoing in the tense silence.
'Shut up,' Li-Tan snapped, his voice a growl as he positioned himself, his hands rough on Song-Min’s hips. 'You don’t get to beg. You don’t get mercy. You’re gonna take this, just like she had to take your betrayal.' The air between them crackled, heavy with intent, as Li-Tan’s gaze burned with a mix of rage and something darker, something he didn’t want to name. Song-Min’s breath hitched, his body tense, as Li-Tan leaned in, the heat of their proximity electric, the promise of retribution hanging like a storm about to break.
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